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Now run from the rain.
From a life that has spawned, then spurned you both
And swear, that if the hellish thorns
That have constructed black walls in your wakes
Should take a grip
It will have meaning no longer

Run, palms clasped together and fingers singing
With prints identical in every way
Minds, so in tune that they spell out letters,
Alternately
Of eternal truths

Run from the dogmatists and the stone fire places-
Merciless keepers of wild beauty,
From the superfluous chapels built for the simplest of gods
And the crystals that break faces into a hundred pieces
Diffract and claim dynasty

Escape the cold passage ways and the
Breaking sun found mummified in unlined sheets

Run,
As storms gather and threaten your oaths born
Beneath ancients oak trees
Where the brook bore witness to the love of
Two miscellaneous parts

Now
As united,   inseparable,   abstract  as
Two sides of one beating heart,
Run from the rain
©2006-2009 ~xSwEetxBlAsPheMyx
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inspired half by jane eyre and half by something more familiar
i hope it entertains you
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to be compleatly honest i just cry'd. FUCK! that is one of the most amazing poums i have ever read!

"simplest of gods"
"Breaking sun found mummified in unlined sheets"
"Two miscellaneous parts"
"fingers singing
"With prints identical in every way"

i cant even begin to describe how this made me feel.

thank you!
i hope you smiled after you cried
and thankyou, it's good to know that someone's listening
XxX

--
I am just a good
for nothing - companion
of moon and flower

- Bill Wyatt
thankyou :hug: x

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I am just a good
for nothing - companion
of moon and flower

- Bill Wyatt
thats allright, just keep em coming.
xxx
Yeah, i can't find words to actually say what i want to say. I like the originality in your work, the fast pace, the subtle meaning that hits you straight. Everything is so perfect. It's so you basically.

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There is no "I" in team.
:glomp: you're so sweet x

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I am just a good
for nothing - companion
of moon and flower

- Bill Wyatt
lol no problem now :hug:

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There is no "I" in team.
I love this poem <3

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Love is like a razor, that leeds your soul to bleed

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